At The A and P Show By Tevita
On Thursday Toroa went to the
A and P show.
We saw lots of animals. My favorite animal was the sheep. Because
they are fluffy and smelly and they were friendly.
A and P show.
We saw lots of animals. My favorite animal was the sheep. Because
they are fluffy and smelly and they were friendly.
When I touched the
sheep they didn’t bite. They smelled like baby's poo. They sounded
like babies crying and they were
having a competition. The sheep eat
juicy grass and they drank muddy water.
The sheep's faces looked quite cute.
sheep they didn’t bite. They smelled like baby's poo. They sounded
like babies crying and they were
having a competition. The sheep eat
juicy grass and they drank muddy water.
The sheep's faces looked quite cute.
I like the way you description the sheep. maybe next time you could write some more cool thing.I have done this before but your one was good then me.
ReplyDeleteHi Tevita its me Miguel, I like the way you described the sheep and I like the way you described their smell as baby poo. Maybe next time you could tell more animals that you saw at the A&P Show. This reminds me of the horses that also smells like baby poo.
ReplyDeleteHi Tevita I like the way you described the sheep and the smell of the sheep poop. But maybe next time you could put more animals on your writing.This work is similar on my one
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