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Thursday, September 6, 2018

The toys escape from the boy by Tevita

The toys escape from the boy


The toys escape from the boy house then the boy came
to play with the toys but it was gone and he saw a little
tiny hole. The toys went under the hole for
1 week and he smashed under
the grass really hard. Finally he got up
and look outside and he was so happily.

2 comments:

  1. I like the way you how to description verb.maybe next time you could writ a long story.

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  2. Ah so the toys were happy because they had escaped from Glen? Yes:)

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